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The Crimson Transit

Seated deep within a shadowed nook,
Weighed down by heavy fruits she bore,
She cast a fierce, unblinking look,
As though a heavy grief she wore.

An approach was made to ask her name,
And where her distant journey lay;
She stood as frozen as a frame,
And turned her gloomy face away.

With golden curls and burning mood,
A fiery aura wrapped her round,
As if she watched, in pensive mood,
The sky above the garden ground.

The engine stopped; she left the car,
And crossed the final, fateful post,
To vanish like a distant star,
A fleeting and mysterious ghost.

Now lost to depths of endless sleep,
Beneath the meadow’s quiet crest,
Where woods and silent herbs run deep,
She lies in motionless, final rest.

The Crimson Transit
This title symbolizes life as a fleeting train journey, where the passenger’s emotional turmoil acts as a heavy cargo that she ultimately carries with her as she departs into the stillness of nature.

📝 Summary

The poem describes an eerie encounter on a train with a deeply troubled, striking woman carrying a heavy burden. Despite an attempt to connect with her, she remains silent and consumed by a fiery, intense internal reflection. After stepping off the train, she mysteriously vanishes into the landscape, leaving a lingering sense of melancholy amidst the quiet meadows and woodlands.

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Published by Khondoker

I am a writer as well as a poet. Till now I have written more than three thousand articles and poems. Many of them have been published in national and international media. Besides, I am a retired Director of Revenue Audit of the government. I have served in BCS(Audit and Accounts). I was born in Meherpur. I am Masters in English and Mathematics. I am an LLB and I have completed Cost and Management Accountant Course. Also I have passed in post graduate course in Industrial Management.

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